How to write convincing dialogue

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Dialogue – speech between two or more people – is important for bringing fiction to life. It gives voice to characters, breaks up the text, balances description and helps to move the action on.

How someone speaks tells the reader a lot about the character, where they come from, how they see the world around them and how they relate to others. It’s an effective way of building tension in a scene, indicating mood and showing how a character changes throughout the narrative.

This post looks at some tips for developing authentic dialogue and sets out a few writing exercises to practice this.

Tips for creating dialogue

  • Develop a unique voice for each character
  • Keep speech patterns consistent – it should be obvious to the reader which character is speaking
  • Keep it real – would someone really say that?
  • Include mannerisms
  • Consider who the character is talking to – most people modify their language depending on their audience
  • Balance dialogue with description – short bursts of dialogue work best.

Exercise 1

  • Go back to your character from the last exercise (or choose a new character)
  • Put your character in a conflict situation with someone else
  • Write a piece of dialogue between the two
  • You can include some description but it should be mostly dialogue

Exercise 2

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  • Look at the image
  • What are the two people in the foreground talking about?
  • Write a piece of dialogue between the two

Exercise 3

This exercise helps develop the character’s unique voice.

  • Go back to your original character
  • Pick a subject they feel passionate about (in a positive or negative way)
  • Write a monologue (their thoughts) about this particular thing
  • It can be an impassioned speech or a rant!
If you’ve tried some of these writing exercises, I’d love to hear how you got on! Feel free to post some of your writing or give me feedback in the comments below!