Dialogue – speech between two or more people – is important for bringing fiction to life. It gives voice to characters, breaks up the text, balances description and helps to move the action on.
How someone speaks tells the reader a lot about the character, where they come from, how they see the world around them and how they relate to others. It’s an effective way of building tension in a scene, indicating mood and showing how a character changes throughout the narrative.
This post looks at some tips for developing authentic dialogue and sets out a few writing exercises to practice this.
Tips for creating dialogue
- Develop a unique voice for each character
- Keep speech patterns consistent – it should be obvious to the reader which character is speaking
- Keep it real – would someone really say that?
- Include mannerisms
- Consider who the character is talking to – most people modify their language depending on their audience
- Balance dialogue with description – short bursts of dialogue work best.
Exercise 1
- Go back to your character from the last exercise (or choose a new character)
- Put your character in a conflict situation with someone else
- Write a piece of dialogue between the two
- You can include some description but it should be mostly dialogue
Exercise 2
- Look at the image
- What are the two people in the foreground talking about?
- Write a piece of dialogue between the two
Exercise 3
This exercise helps develop the character’s unique voice.
- Go back to your original character
- Pick a subject they feel passionate about (in a positive or negative way)
- Write a monologue (their thoughts) about this particular thing
- It can be an impassioned speech or a rant!
If you’ve tried some of these writing exercises, I’d love to hear how you got on! Feel free to post some of your writing or give me feedback in the comments below!